Advert:
-Modify to one picture but the layout is good
or
-Make the images more vintage looking.
DPS1/Design Agency
-Think about angular stuff
-Good background and heading
-Imported pictures don't really work
-Main text to big
-More Info
-Good structure, nice font
-Background image overpowers the whole document, maybe blend in
DPS2/Manchester Parks
-Very Good Layout
-Too green, Overpowering Background
-Really Nice Background Image
-The text to the right gets a bit lost
-Best design so far
-Type sorta blurs into the background
-Blurred Images
-Right Page layout doesn't compliment the left page
-Good Concept, Nice use of colour
So, from all that it's very across the board in regards to what I have to modify so I will consider the opinions presented here and progress where necessary. I think i'll progress as follows
Advert-
Modify some of the images to give a more vintage look
DPS1/Design Agency -
Work on not having the background overpower the text
Experiment with font for title
DPS2/Parks
-Text to right needs work
-Tone down background
Many of the complaints were because of blurred images which is funny because the actual uploads on this blog aren't. Anyway, better get to it.
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