Feedback For DPS/Advert 2

So...I apparently have the internet despite being under the impression it was off this weekend. So, i'll do a post on the feedback I got on Thursday.

Copy
Some mistakes, different font would work better DPS1
Some mistakes, different font would work better DPS 2
Hard to read type Advert

Images
Looks fine no problem DPS 1
Great but pixelated circle Design Agency DPS
Fix logo on Advert

Referencing
All references given on blog

Grids
Title on left side sits alone DPS Parks
Good DPS Design Agency
Eye Catching Advert

Editorial Flow Team
Left hand side needs thickening (more text?), background needs diming a little, better font to compliment article DPS Parks
Clever and well thought out DPS Design Agency
Good Advert

Typography
Type too playful DPS Parks
Text under tile is not right size or space

Based off of the feedback, I have a pretty good idea what needs to be tidied up and modified.